Saturday, June 16, 2012

An untold story-Part 2


Hi All,

Am very sorry for the delay in posting the sequel for my blog on "Untold story". Please check out the link below for the 1st part of the story.

http://allaboutkrishna.blogspot.in/2011/12/untold-story.html

Here goes the final one:-)

                   The thunder storm was indeed a blessing in disguise. Chandrika's dad and her brother convinced Krishna and Balarama to stay back that night in their house due to the bad weather. Within a while dinner was served with utmost devotion by Chandrika's mom and Chandrika helped her mom with whatever she could continuously thinking about Krishna secretly in her heart.  After dinner, when chandrika was serving water to help her guests to wash their hands in the garden behind her kitchen, krishna caught hold of her beautiful hands tightly making chandrika drop the pot of water. Chandrika's hands started shivering out of excitement & nervousness. She tried her best to squeeze away her hand from Madhusudhana but he held them so tight that her delicate hands turned pink. She looked at him helplessly panting and sweating. He gazed at her with a beautiful smile and his inviting eyes whispered, "I can't wait to hug you!" She somehow struggled and took back her hands at once turning away from Krishna with eyes filled with tears. She said, "I belong only to Lord Sri Hari. Please do not have such intentions towards me......"

Krishna said with a laugh- " you know I am very adamant with my devotees and attached to them. Even by chance if my devotees get away from me due to illusion or forgetfulness, I grab them back to me in no minute as I don't part away from my devotees and won't let them go away from me.....I am everything to my dear devotees and they are everything to me..... that is the intimacy we share....."

Chandrika was admiring his speech and in response she said lifting one of her rainbow-like eyebrow, "You are a smooth talker....but try your hand with other beautiful girls. Don't try to impress me by talking like the ultimate lord....."

Krishna with a witty smile said, "well.., then I don't know how you hugged me so tightly in the temple and even kissed me when I read your beautiful palms. Infact you hugged me so tight that few of your bangles too broke if am not wrong!"

Chandrika's eyes widened as she heard what Krishna said realising that it was the lord himself who came in disguise of an old lady in the temple and it is the very Lord of her life who is standing in front of her with the most beautiful smile. She stood still gazing at him in surprise with tears flooded eyes. Krishna taking advantage of that little situation came a little closer and told her with a sweetest smile, "Chandrika, you have waited for me all your life crying and hankering for me alone. Now the time has ripened and I have come here just for you! I hide myself only to reveal myself to my dear devotees...I remain silent only to talk to my devotees very soon...you have to understand me" Chandrika's happiness knew no bounds.....that very second Chandrika threw herself on Krishna hugging him tightly, crying and laughing out of joy for having embraced the most adorable lord of her heart for whom she waited all her life. Krishna kissed her neck and whispered in her ears, "you always belong to me alone Chandrika...."

Soon it was time for all of them to hit their beds for a good sleep however we know that these two lovers were not in a mood to sleep. Beautiful and comfortable rooms were offered to the guests and very soon all were fast asleep.

                              Chandrika was so troubled out of passion for Krishna that she couldn't even stay still for a second in her bed. She kept squeezing her pillow thinking about the most charming Krishna. Her eyes were longing for his beautiful sight again, her arms were hugging him in imagination, her lips smiled whenever his touch was remembered, her hips starved for his touch, her braided hair was loosened for him to tousle, her breasts were moving up and down like beautiful waves as she was breathing heavily being aroused by the most enchanting Krishna, her feet wanted to run to his bedroom, her shyness arrested her feet........Krishna who waits to bless his devotees every second, sneaked out to the beautiful garden and started playing his most romantic and inviting music with his flute. No more could Chandrika resist...she got up from her bed which until then felt like thorns to her due to separation from lord Narayanan. She ran towards the garden like a swift wind.... her bangles, anklets and earings jingled beautifully. It was a full moon night. The entire garden was bright and beautiful with so much of romance in air! Krishna was comfortably leaning against a parijatham tree sitting on the bed of smooth grass. Chandrika walked slowly towards him gazing at him passionately. After a point, she stood still in the garden being unable to take the next step towards him. She smiled with her head bowed down....few of the flowers from her hair fell down due to the cold breeze after the rain decorating the fresh smelling grass. Krishna got up and came near her totally admiring the love, emotions and expressions of his girl. He came so close that she had to go a step back being unable to stand at such close-quarters. Her heart was beating so fast than ever.......her eyes were restless...her hands stopped him pressing his majestic chest slightly from coming further close. Krishna gently slided his hands on her slender waist, grabbed her near and gently kissed her forehead. She stayed still closing her eyes and smiling.......Krishna with a very beautiful smile leaned a bit on her trying to kiss her lips, she just pushed him and ran away from him a few steps away. Krishna chased her...., dragged her towards him holding her bangled hands and they made love all night. It was such a magical night! As the sky started to brighten-up, it gave the fear of separation to Chandrika as she knew that he was going to take-off to Dwaraka that morning. She was lying on his beautiful chest. Krishna was relaxing. It was breezy and cool..they were enjoying each other's company. Chandrika's tears rolled down wetting Krishna's chest. She hugged him even more tightly as though communicating, "I can't let you go.........." Krishna wiped her tears and promised her that he would come back and marry her for sure. That morning the young and handsome brothers had to say bye to everyone. As their horses kept moving forward, Chandrika kept gazing at Krishna, tears were pouring from her eyes. Krishna looked at her with immense love and gave a consoling smile.

       After a couple of years krishna came back to that village asking for Chandrika's hand. Her family was very thrilled with the proposal. The marriage was conducted with pomp in that village. Everywhere there was celebration. The bride and the groom were decked-up in a grand manner, people were playing all sorts of musical instruments celebrating the occasion. Chandrika was married to Krishna very beautifully making the entire village happy.

21 comments:

  1. aww...I could feel the romance...literally. Since this story was posted a lot earlier, I had my very own climax to it- I guess, yours is better!! With the whole mood of passion and intimacy of romance!!

    I just donno how to praise...I think this was a truly beautiful romantic kahani. There were many such lovely scenes that i could imagine through your writing...wow....Lucky this Chandrika woman! (jealous)

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  2. Hi Tanvee,

    Thank you so much:-) Really njoyed writing it as well...

    btw am too jealous of Chandrika!!!!!

    LOve,
    LUEN

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  3. Finally, oh Finally i get to comment!!
    Great story aka! :)
    Dunno what else to say, it is so infinitely beautiful!! :)

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  4. Finally!! You guys have no idea how ecstatic i am on having found this blog! I recently came across drainpiper's blog, following it now, but sadly she hasnt been online i guess.My comment is still waiting moderation :( Anyway its like i already know u LUEN,ILWK.. :) Hopefully i can share my love for krishna here.. PS- I am new to this whole blog thing,sorry for the ramble..

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    1. Hi! @Anonymous: Tnx for the heartfelt comment.
      i speak for all the writers when i say how glad we are to get a comment like this! Please do share your love for Him, and enrich us as well! :)
      That is the real motive behind this whole pretence of serious writing- we all ramble here, in the hope to connect with yet another devotee!! :)

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  6. Hello @ Lostgopi,

    Welcome to this blogsite:-)) We never knew that there was this hidden gopi ......haha Thanks for joining hands with us!

    Please share your love for him with us here....so that we all too can get motivated and inspired by ur love for him:-)

    And above all its just so much pleasure talking and reading about him!

    Love,
    LUEN

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  7. hare krsna!!
    Am your newest follower.. and new to blogging world..
    krsnarpanam.blogspot.in
    Shivani

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  8. Hi Shivani,

    Welcome to the blogspace!

    Really hoping to see you more here:-)))

    Thanks,
    LUEN

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  9. Doesnt the Kartik month begin tomorrow,or does it come later here in the South? I wouldn't have known about the significance of this month if it werent for the posts here :)

    Oh and sharad purnima too! I am going to be staring at the moon and wishing Time would just go back 5000 years..
    Wishing everyone here lots of love for our dearest Damodara :-)











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  10. Who is Chandrika ? There is nobody by that name Krishna married. Is this a story you made up ?

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  14. thanks CHANDRIKA. you have an excellent imagination indeed.very good

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  15. poonam vyas(working as a manager in multinatoinal company)January 31, 2015 at 4:23 PM

    DEAR CHANDRI, i love you and your blog. you imagine in a wonderful way. i read your stories frequently..........very charming stories........hahahahaaaaaaaaa................

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  16. Loved it... pls come back... lv this blog!! :-)))

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  17. I am left speechless....a very good story...throughout the story I felt the true love of khana...oh only if I was chandrika...love this blog..

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